In today's class, we were given a paper to draft out our first scenes of the movie opener, to get a basic idea of how the storyline should go. These are the scenes my group and I came up with following the plot line previously made. Suri contributed to making the first draft of the scenes, Niliem and I contributed to explaining a detailed play-through of each scene, and lastly, Kamryn came up with the transitions and sounds. We all aided in coming up with the angles.
Scene 1
In this scene, doctor Elena looks at hr husband in the hospital bed, lying unconscious. Distress is clearly displayed on her face. Wires attached to Daniel's skin, keeping him alive. She finds out his dire condition and is informed that he can't be helped since Daniel has such a rare blood type. Finding a donor would be nearly impossible, especially for such a vital organ. (heart)
A two-shot is used for the two characters having a sad moment. It helps keep both characters in focus at the same time.
A non-diegetic sound is playing of the heating of the machines and faint breathing from Daniel. Elena's soft sobs are heard.
A straight cut is used to transition to a different setting smoothly.
Scene 2
In this scene doctor Elana goes back to work the next day and has a check-up with her usual patients. Everything is good with the patient, but she will call her after the scans and blood work develop. Elena gets the idea to save her husband by using the heart of another healthy person and makes up a lie to get the patient to meet her alone.
There is an over-the-shoulder shot of the doctor talking with the patient in the hospital. The shot helps draw focus to the doctor's face and helps the viewer see the POV of the patient.
A conversation between the doctor and the patient, and the patient, while the doctor scribbles on a paper, is heard.
A reverse-shot is used to show the conversation between Elena and the patient. This helps show the POV of both characters as they talk.
Scene 3
In this scene, the doctor calls the patient later on to tell her that she needs to come back to a different private clinic because the blood results came up and something looks wrong. The doctor tells her a time and location where everyone will be gone.
A close-up of the doctor conversing with the patient over the phone is shown, which aids in displaying the emotion in the doctor's face clearly as the patient responds.
The sound of their conversation both the doctor and the person on the phone. Also, the phone is ringing, waiting for the patient to respond.
A fade-out is used to show a different character at a different location and help transition through the scenes
Scene 4
In this scene doctor Elecna meets the patient at an empty private clinic owned by Elena. The patient is checked in by the "secretary" (a friend of Elena's helping her with the crime). The patient walks into Elena's office to talk about her blood results.
There is a wide shot of the patient checking in with the receptionist to establish the new location, and the background is shown, empty.
Then the sound of a TV in the background playing in the distance, a conversation between the receptionist and the patient.
A match-cut is used to transition between the reception desk and Elena's office, using the patient entering the door to get out of the reception and the door of Elena's office as a match.
Scene 5
In this scene, the patient meets Dr. Elena in her office, and doctor Elena explains the negative results of her blood test. Elana explains that an emergency surgery will need to be performed. Elana tells the patient the procedure is quick and only needs her there.
A mid-shot is used to show Elena and the patient having a conversation about the test results. The mid-shot helps draw focus to their upper body language.
Elena and the patient are talking. The sound of Elena flipping through the results on paper.
A J-cut is used to blend in the sounds of the background of this scene with the eerie music of the next scene to introduce scene 6.
Scene 6
In this scene, Elena comes behind the patient with a cloth and puts it over her mouth and nose to put her to sleep. The patient's shock is shown in her eyes as she begins to fall asleep; she gets dragged into another room, and the door closes by itself. Then, to end this dramatic scene, the title screen is shown, leaving the audience in a cliffhanger.
A Dutch angle is used to create a mood of disorientation, unease, and tension as the patient's eyes show fear, and then a tracking shot is used as the camera follows the patient being dragged by Elena into a different room.
Eerie music plays in the background, and footsteps are heard.
A straight cut transition is used to cut directly to the title screen, continuing the drama of the scene.